Pounding the Redhead in the Corner

After a hard fight, I’ve been outmaneuvered by precise shots, then hurt with hard punches smashing me to both the head and body. I put up a game fight, but it’s come down to the classic beating the shit out of someone in the corner as she covers up. But, with one eye punched closed, exhausted and battered, it’s only a matter of time until the fight is over—either with a knockout or the referee stopping it. And—this is to prove who’s tougher; the ref will be hesitant to stop the fight.

I can take a lot—most folk wouldn’t still be standing—but this flurry of punches will finish the fight. We’re both bloody—mostly with my blood—and the savage hook to the jaw is spraying more across the ring.

This is mainly an exercise in improving my artistic skills, but I thought people might enjoy it. I tried for effects both subtle and blatant, so whatever you see in the way of better techniques, please call out—let me know what you see different, for better or worse.

Incidentally, what should the brunette’s next punch be?